Torana
10-14-2008, 12:30 AM
http://www.fearandtremblingmag.com/
My first publication is now viewable! It is viewable for free. So go check it out! NOW! :p
It is a horror love poem titled 'The Sweetest Valentine' (http://fearandtremblingmag.com/item.php?sub_id=4159)
ValianceInEnd
10-14-2008, 12:32 AM
Awesome! Great poem Torana! :D
Shadow Dragon
10-14-2008, 12:39 AM
I liked it. You are a really good horror writer Torano.
marina
10-14-2008, 12:46 AM
http://www.fearandtremblingmag.com/
My first publication is now viewable! It is viewable for free. So go check it out! NOW! :p
It is a horror love poem titled 'The Sweetest Valentine'Very cool. Congratulations.
I love how you end it with those last 3 lines. :D
Torana
10-14-2008, 12:49 AM
THanks Shadow :D
marina, thank you. I loved the ending. I thought it was just the perfect way to end it. To give it a slight... innocent kind of feel to the ending.
Scarlett_156
10-14-2008, 12:54 AM
Here's a link directly to the sweetest valentine (http://www.fearandtremblingmag.com/item.php?sub_id=4159)--the link given just goes to the home page of the mag, and I'm (almost) too lazy to click my way through to the stuff I want to read.
Good work. :) yours in Chaos, Scarlett
Torana
10-14-2008, 01:33 AM
THanks Scarlett, and I fixed the initial post so that the link is there. I was meant to put that in, but completely forgot. Sorry people. Thank you again Scarlett. :)
Cogito
10-14-2008, 07:32 AM
Congratulations, Torana, Ms. Published Poet!
Your poem is wonderful indeed - it just tears your heart out. :)
Acglaphotis
10-14-2008, 08:04 AM
Congrats! I love the ending too.
Torana
10-14-2008, 09:01 AM
THank you both :)
And Cogito LOL! That is does! :D :D
Heather Louise
10-14-2008, 11:03 AM
congratulations Torana ... your peice is excellent and it must be amazing to see it published on an official site. :)
Raven
10-14-2008, 11:17 AM
All I can say is. Thats one of your best Princess. You've come such a long way since those early days. Well done Princess. Now go and write more. ;)
Torana
10-14-2008, 10:13 PM
thanks heather. It does feel pretty good to see it up there.
Raven, thank you and I never do stop writing :p as much as I would like to, my inspiration keeps my fingers tapping away at the keys... I swear one day I'll wear my fingers down to the bone... now that would look awesome! hahaha!
Raven
10-20-2008, 09:06 AM
Well it'd go with that Image of yours. :p
Seriously though Princess you keep it up. I've said it for years now and firmly stand by it because this is living prioof but the more your write the better it gets. One day will come when you make a great amount of cash from this.