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Jack The Ripper
01-01-2007, 07:52 AM
OK Each person adds one line to the poem.

I'll start.


Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.

Raven
01-01-2007, 08:06 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old

Jack The Ripper
01-01-2007, 11:44 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out

Raven
01-01-2007, 11:56 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right

Frost
01-02-2007, 02:11 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;

Raven
01-02-2007, 06:33 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jack The Ripper
01-02-2007, 09:40 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing

Raven
01-06-2007, 01:18 PM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing

ariella
01-17-2007, 09:52 PM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know

Raven
01-18-2007, 04:42 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken

ariella
01-18-2007, 06:10 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see

Raven
01-18-2007, 09:41 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers

ariella
02-14-2007, 09:52 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks

Torana
03-13-2007, 12:18 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life

Night Haunter
03-14-2007, 05:02 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Raven
04-03-2007, 04:23 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More

Torana
04-03-2007, 04:52 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen

Raven
04-03-2007, 10:00 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen
leaving only ghosts

Torana
04-03-2007, 07:38 PM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen
leaving only ghosts
And shadows creeping through the night

Raven
04-07-2007, 07:00 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen
leaving only ghosts
And shadows creeping through the night
leaving a shroud of darkness

Torana
04-13-2007, 06:46 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen
leaving only ghosts
And shadows creeping through the night
leaving a shroud of darkness

Crystal teardrops floading vacant streets

Raven
04-19-2007, 04:46 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen
leaving only ghosts
And shadows creeping through the night
leaving a shroud of darkness

Crystal teardrops floading vacant streets
Under dusk skies with windy howls

The Reaper
04-24-2007, 09:03 AM
Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
As the day is old
Jacky Sets Out
Looking Out For Whats Right
Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
CLearing his sights for this night.

Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
Ready for a slicing
and a dicing
The victims are never to know
As if By stealth they are taken
Never again the light will they see
As jacky nippers
Through the dark streets he stalks
Soon to be taken into the next life
Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
That drowns our souls

Forever More
Never again seen
leaving only ghosts
And shadows creeping through the night
leaving a shroud of darkness

Crystal teardrops floading vacant streets
Under dusk skies with windy howls
Comes the new night again