Would you help me with a Japanese style tale?

[Geishapolis.com]

I have recently started a website, that is supposed to improve writing skills of people who'd like to learn by doing. The whole engine of the website, which I developed myself, is an tool that allows posting stories and commenting them. Besides, it allows any user to post a sequel, a prehistory, or an alternative view for any story that is published. This will make the website look and feel like a neverending story. That was a conception.

The tale is all about Japan and geishas culture. However, it's not a historical review but a fantasy.

I would appreciate any of you to either participate as a contributor with your own small stories (like a diary, memoirs), or comment stories of other contributors (showing mistakes and ways of improvement)

If you are interested the link is: http://www.geishapolis.com (http://www.geishapolis.com)

I will be glad to see you living on the website:D

[Nexus]

Well, im SURE that you're going to post other stuff here at writingforums because its EXTREMELY rude to simply advertise and leave.
You seem nice, I hope you can find the time to get to know us here at writingforums! I hope that I get a chance to look at your site!

[Crazy Ivan]

He's an adbot, smart one.

[Nexus]

shut up! Just cause im nice!

DELETE HIM!!!!!!