Review question

[emiloprisa]

Hi guys! I'm kinda new here and o was wondering if this is the right place to post a few pages for review?

Have a nice day!

[Cogito]

It is not. All writing posted for comment must be posted in the Review Room, which is a full-participation critiquing workshop. You must post at least two constructive critiques (http://www.writingforums.org/showthread.php?p=408268#post408268), as part of that participation, before you may post your own writing for critique.

This is mentioned in the site rules.