View Full Version : One Line At a Time!
dazbizkit
03-10-2010, 08:51 AM
Ok, this has been done before but I just want to see how this one turns out.
I'll start the story off with a line and then another member adds their own, and the next member adds another, and ....you probably get it!
So we should see a story unfolding before us!
Here it goes:
As I walked down the hallway, all I could feel was the wind spiralling past.
Wreybies
03-10-2010, 12:07 PM
As I walked down the hallway, all I could feel was the wind spiralling past.
No ceiling was evident and the steel grey sky roiled above. A dream?
dazbizkit
03-10-2010, 01:45 PM
Surely it can't be; can it? The trees lean back and forth. The storm is growing.
IamIan
03-10-2010, 10:38 PM
The branches scraped the wallpaper leaving gashes in the walls.
Shadow Reeves
03-11-2010, 04:08 AM
i rounded a corner as the wind became desperate and saw a red wooden door not thirty metres distant.
Wreybies
03-11-2010, 10:24 AM
Thirty meters? I thought to myself. Where am I? The Pentagon?
Shadow Reeves
03-11-2010, 02:17 PM
as i began to walk to the door, it appeared to get closer than it should - as though it was moving towards me at the same pace. "**** is is weird" i muttered under my breath.
dazbizkit
03-11-2010, 05:35 PM
As I tread with careful steps, the sound of a woman's laughter shot passed my ear and headed towards the door.
CharlieVer
03-12-2010, 08:21 AM
Then, suddenly, the laughter stopped, and there was a gunshot, and the smell of fresh earth hung in the air.
Nackl of Gilmed
03-12-2010, 08:30 AM
I knew with dread certainty that beyond the door lay death; the only question was whether or not that death was mine. I turned to leave, but the passage back was now only darkness.
CharlieVer
03-12-2010, 08:44 AM
And not only darkness--it was as though the hallway behind me had dissolved into non-existence, and when I looked back, it seemed that I was standing on the edge of a cliff leading to nowhere, nothing, and all existence was the hallway from which I had turned, and that red door, beckoning.
Nackl of Gilmed
03-12-2010, 08:49 AM
I knew I had no choice but to open it. The knowledge did not lessen my fear. I slowly, slowly, raised my hand to the doorknob. It was brass, and so cold the skin of my hand froze to its surface. No turning back now, not even into the nothingness. I opened the door.
CharlieVer
03-12-2010, 08:53 AM
That's when I saw her body, cold and hard, soaking wet, covered with mud, and very, very dead.
Nackl of Gilmed
03-12-2010, 11:58 AM
I would like to say that I felt sadness. That her terrible beauty moved me to passionate tears. But I felt only relief. Whatever deadly storm had gathered me in its wake, it had not been here for me. I was alive.
CharlieVer
03-12-2010, 01:19 PM
I stood, shocked, when suddenly, I heard the sound of sirens, growing louder.
dazbizkit
03-12-2010, 05:00 PM
Slowly but surely, reality started to slide into focus. Everything I thought was real turned out to be an hallucination. I stood over her body, clutching the baseball bat I had beaten her with. Peering into her vacant stare as she lay in the bath tub. The gun I had used to finished her off lay on the floor.
Schkatt
03-14-2010, 03:29 PM
I relayed the unfolding of the scenes back and forth amidst the mist of my brain.
NathanBrazil
03-14-2010, 06:51 PM
A cop bursts through the door.
Nackl of Gilmed
03-15-2010, 03:04 AM
I stared at the officer, puzzled. He had not been surprised to see me. Had not assumed I was the killer. Had not made any mention of the fact that I held the murder weapon in my... but when I looked down I discovered I wasn't actually holding it. The blood-soaked bat and the gun both lay by the bath. The only thing in my hand was a police-issue revolver.
dazbizkit
03-15-2010, 07:56 AM
"Are you OK sir?"
"Err yeah I'm fine" I say while I shake my head.
Why am I getting these hallucinations? It's ever since these murders have started happening. I've got to get to the bottom of this. I've got to protect the city, and myself.
CharlieVer
03-15-2010, 08:51 AM
Soon, after the incident with the banana and the porcupine, I was running for my life. Let me tell you about the banana and the porcupine, and how these were connected to the woman in the bathtub and the officer's indifference to my apparent commission of the murder.
NathanBrazil
03-16-2010, 12:49 AM
Unknown Editor
[Feeds the film backward. What the . . . This guy's an idiot. Vague construction sounds. Indifference, indeed.
--No, wait. It was BlackBriar . . . It was a hit . . . Don't you see? The dude wasn't really a cop.
Will somebody shut that guy up? The sound of packing tape unrolling and then muffled speech.. That's better. Hammering sounds.
Let me just change this user name to G-Nat. Done.]
The hallucinations weave in and out of my mind. Something about a porcupine and his singing banana and then . . .
"I said drop the bat!!!" There is noticable tension in the cop's arms.
I'm gripping the bloody bat and the cop's head looks like a nice round baseball.
Cogito
03-19-2010, 09:34 AM
A FRESH START
Kendrie Phillips watched in dismay as her flight began to taxi away from the gate without her.
Nackl of Gilmed
03-21-2010, 09:46 AM
How the aeroplane had managed to fit itself into a taxi was an issue best left unexplored.
De La Chretiens
03-23-2010, 05:01 AM
That inane little joke wobbled in her head for a while. Of course, she knew that taxi meant "to move" instead of the yellow vehicle that made travel convenient.
Toxic.Ox
04-04-2010, 03:22 PM
There was a nagging voice inside my head, growing with speed, feeding on my fear like a parasite, What if I was the danger, who would protect the innocents from me? By now the fear had grown to the size of a mountain, with the voice at it's peak.
gseries1
04-05-2010, 12:58 AM
Unable to stand the banging of my own thoughts any longer, I shouted to the world that, "
Writer_of_Wrongs
05-04-2010, 08:13 PM
I HAVE NO LIFE!!!" and proceeded to sprint to the gate. She asked for a different flight, but the secretary just kept clicking away at the keyboard, as if she didn't exist.
Meliha
05-05-2010, 03:14 AM
Oh no! There are two of these now and it's my fault; sorry! :redface: Can we merge them or something?
I didn't even care 'where to'; I just wanted to fly: Taj Mahal, Aya Sofia, leaning tower or Eifffel Tower - what did I care.
sanz57
05-06-2010, 05:47 AM
But the nagging thought in my head persisted. For some reason, people had stopped responding to my actions and words.
KurtistheTurtle
05-06-2010, 10:03 AM
Maybe it had something to do with the large diaper I was wearing. Well, it could be worse -- at least now I was prepared for an emergency.
Writer_of_Wrongs
05-12-2010, 07:56 PM
then the things in my hands came into focus:it was a banana suitcase, with a porcupine in a small, steel crate with air holes.
Meliha
05-15-2010, 05:50 AM
Was I only dreaming?
Shadow Reeves
05-19-2010, 07:07 PM
or was i dreaming in a dream?
dazbizkit
05-20-2010, 04:11 PM
Or was I dreaming of dreaming in a dream? Whatever I was doing I had to find an explanation to why I had managed to smuggle a porcupine and a perishable fruit item through customs!
Manav
05-21-2010, 04:12 AM
And then she appeared... in a white gown, her teeth glinting, a halo behind her head; everything was clear now.
Cogito
05-21-2010, 07:58 AM
I knew, right then, that I was indeed developing cataracts.
Writer_of_Wrongs
05-21-2010, 08:21 PM
And then she looked at me, i gazed back, and she said, "I am way out of your league."
"Nonesense, haven't you ever read Charles Darwin's obituary!?" I couldn't believe her ingorance.
Writer_of_Wrongs
05-25-2010, 06:00 PM
She gazed at my fruit-like suitcase, and replied, "is that edible?"
JTheGreat
05-26-2010, 09:15 PM
The mod-design of the airport gave it all away though, as she looked into a haphazardly-shaped mirror opposite of the desk: Kendrie Phillips was invisible.
Writer_of_Wrongs
05-28-2010, 06:46 PM
"Dang shrooms are at it again," she muttered to herself, and continued to go back to the car, when suddenly...
solarstarrkatt
05-31-2010, 11:31 PM
Chuck Norris destroyed the Earth.
Nikhil
06-01-2010, 09:24 AM
With the Earth destroyed, she became a spirit.
Squeeky
06-28-2010, 06:43 PM
Which wandered the ocean in search of spongebob, hoping he was real.
Unit7
06-28-2010, 09:27 PM
All the while wondering how it was possible to search the ocean for spongebob with the planet destroyed.
Cogito
06-28-2010, 09:41 PM
But then, no one said it would be easy-peasy.
Manav
06-29-2010, 03:47 AM
His determination to find the largest spongebob in the universe never wavered.
Shadow Reeves
06-29-2010, 08:53 AM
and hand in hand they wandered the stars, through the sulphuric seas of venus and glacial wonders of neptune they searched for the mighty spongebob. The other spirits rumoured that he was the only one that could replace the earth to its former putrescence as he was mightier than Chuck Norris.
Shadow Reeves
07-01-2010, 07:10 AM
THE END
?
id say so...
FRESH START
Jake Bloggs sat on his couch watching TV while wearing only his 1980's star treck T-shirt and boxers.
Squeeky
07-01-2010, 11:07 AM
He was a normal nerd about to have his life change forever.
alphabetsoup
07-01-2010, 01:03 PM
His Television Set Was Flickering As It Seemed To Pull Him Closer, Closer Into An Abyss Of Endless Drama In TVLand. "BEAM ME UP SCOTTY!" He Proclaimed. Had He Accepted His Fate Too Soon?
Shadow Reeves
07-03-2010, 10:13 AM
as his stomach neared the TV set it began to warp and distort - pixelate some may say.
Manav
07-04-2010, 07:46 AM
Jake Bloggs sat on his couch watching TV while wearing only his 1980's star treck T-shirt and boxers.
He was a normal nerd about to have his life change forever.
His Television Set Was Flickering As It Seemed To Pull Him Closer, Closer Into An Abyss Of Endless Drama In TVLand. "BEAM ME UP SCOTTY!" He Proclaimed. Had He Accepted His Fate Too Soon?
as his stomach neared the TV set it began to warp and distort - pixelate some may say.
And then he felt an unusual calm as if he were in a dream.
Suggestions: Copy paste the above and add your sentence in bolt: to make it easier for the next poster. Also, add just one sentence as per the rules, don't get carried away :)
Shadow Reeves
07-04-2010, 08:56 AM
His dream was abruptly broken when his wife walked into the room, and on seeing her husband rubbing his stomach on the TV, turned the power off at the wall.
Garfiun
07-07-2010, 03:44 PM
Shocked, the husband threw a punch at his wife just missing her.
jo spumoni
07-07-2010, 06:09 PM
She raised her eyebrows, and muttered, her voice trailing upward at the last syllable, "Spousal abuse?"
Garfiun
07-07-2010, 07:01 PM
"Im sorry! It will not happen again." said the husband. "Your right." said the wife.
jo spumoni
07-08-2010, 01:49 AM
"You used the wrong kind of "your," Jake told her.
Fantasy of You
07-08-2010, 08:28 AM
'Thank you, Jake.' She walked off into the distance, never to be seen again. Until...
keeksta
07-08-2010, 01:03 PM
The day when the sky turned green, and the seas turned to dust
jacklondonsghost
07-08-2010, 01:22 PM
Humankind had lived under the threat of nuclear war for decades, and yet nobody truly believed it could happen until the first of the warheads dropped on Los Angeles.
jo spumoni
07-08-2010, 02:36 PM
And amidst the rubble sat Jake Bloggs, faded Star Trek t-shirt on his back, shaking his head, and muttering, "God damn it, I knew this would happen. Why didn't anyone ever believe me?"
keeksta
07-11-2010, 04:42 PM
Through the dust Jake saw his wife, her skin was as white as snow, and in her hand she held a...
jo spumoni
07-19-2010, 01:58 AM
baby. She had found him lying in the rubble, his wails splitting the deafening silence of the barren earth.
"What are we going to feed it?" Jake asked, and she looked at him and he knew that she didn't intend to feed it at all.
cellofr3ak
07-23-2010, 11:47 PM
Looking solemnly down at the child, the wife began to cry.
JessaNova
08-30-2010, 10:48 AM
Fighting through sobs, she wiped her eyes and whimpered, "This baby is no human baby."
SashaMerideth
08-30-2010, 11:09 AM
Jake had seen enough sci-fi, so he grabbed a shard of broken glass.
white
09-04-2010, 04:16 PM
And the baby (that was no human baby), sensing real danger, kung-fu kicked the shard out of Jake's hand.
solarstarrkatt
09-04-2010, 08:44 PM
Jake, swearing under his breath, grabbed another shard.
Soft Rains
09-04-2010, 11:48 PM
Shard in hand, Jake turned around only to find his small-bodied foe several feet off the ground.
JessaNova
09-06-2010, 05:57 PM
"No," he whispered, "Is that... Jackie Chan?"
Naiyn
09-12-2010, 08:10 PM
"Jackie Chan? Hahahahhahaa" The baby laughed. "Foolish human, I am Chackie Jan, master of Fu Kung, and I challange you to a duel."
Shadow Reeves
09-19-2010, 07:08 AM
"request denied." Chackie Jan cocked his head to one side as he processed this reply. jake continued
"im a little busy perhaps take a rain check?"
C.A.Smith
09-19-2010, 04:09 PM
"No, no rain check today."
"Than we shall fight to the death."
eden baylee
12-03-2010, 10:24 PM
"Get ready to die today."
Reggie
12-04-2010, 03:02 AM
"I'm gonna tear you lean from lean. Don't worry, 'cause this will only hurt a lot."
Youniquee
12-04-2010, 06:07 PM
Jake backed away, fear pulsing through every vein in his body.
"Don't kill me, kill that old man!"
Squidget
12-09-2010, 11:47 AM
Chackie slowly turned to where a elderly man had been scrambling through the rubble.
Evelyanin
12-09-2010, 02:22 PM
Fear filled his eyes, and a lone tear trickled down the old man's cheek as he painfully scraped his dry, brittle hands across the rough surface of the concrete scraps.
Squeeky
01-18-2011, 06:07 PM
"Just make it quick," he said. "Or I'll be late for dinner."
Petunia
01-29-2011, 04:52 PM
'Dinner,' said Chackie, 'You are dinner!' while he raised his nunchucks
PapaSmurfberry
01-30-2011, 08:32 AM
"Well then, cover me with cheese and call me a souffle, lets rock." he shouts.
Squeeky
02-04-2011, 03:55 PM
Fists in the air he charges.
Cerrus
02-07-2011, 03:05 PM
"OH IT'S ON BABY!" The old man shouted as he pulled out a rocket launcher.
yorutora
02-09-2011, 07:29 AM
He shot the rocket launcher missing all humans, but hitting a...
Manav
02-11-2011, 07:27 AM
.... milk jar which broke into pieces and a fountain of milk appear from the ground where the jar was.
Darkjester79
03-05-2011, 08:40 PM
Out of the fountain a beautiful milk slyph appeared overjoyed to be free from her imprisonment within the jar for ten thousand years. then she turned, saw Chackie and the old man starting world war three. "...I'm outta here!" She grumbled, stamping off.
Bay K.
03-19-2011, 01:12 AM
With surprising speed, the old man caught up with her.
"Not till you grant me my three wishes, Sylphy! I know my rights!"
K.S.A.
03-21-2011, 07:42 AM
"Yeah? And I know a good lawyer. So, back off!"
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