Bambilover101
10-08-2006, 04:53 PM
Ok so I have this idea for a short story about friendship in which there are two girls and they have a fight and one dies. Does that sound like something the English teacher would give a good grade or a bad grade.:)
Sapphire
10-08-2006, 08:51 PM
Well, it depends on how you go about the story really. You can't make it bland, you really have to put some meaning behind it.
Felony
10-08-2006, 10:05 PM
Depends. Some teachers may not like some stories and others might love it.
IndianaJoan
10-10-2006, 06:41 PM
Anyone can write a story, but not anyone can write it well.
You do your best and you write about what you want to write about.
It is not a matter of what the story is about that turns someone off. You can write of the most heinous of events, but if you do it well, even the least hardcore will read it.
If you want someone to review it for you and help you with it..PM me :) I'd be happy to help
Nexus
10-11-2006, 03:31 AM
I dont know, you need to give me more information. If you add a fantasy element it could make for an awesome story. Either that or have the girl dies and the other girl starts believing in god and she comes back.
Felony
10-11-2006, 09:24 PM
Well if u add suspense as well as action and romance along with the principles of life (lessons you learn through life) then she/he is bound to give you an A.
Laimtoe
10-15-2006, 04:18 PM
If you want someone to review it for you and help you with it..PM me. I'd be happy to help
I'd have to second that.