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Gagoots
07-08-2007, 04:23 PM
Complex issue:
OK.
I have a line of dialog where the person is directly quoting another person.
I understand this to be
" - for the person speaking
' for the quotes inside the quotes
BUT...
the person says: "does this ring a bell? '
or should it be
"does this ring a bell: '
OR....
"does this ring a bell?: '
hmmm....
Crazy Ivan
07-08-2007, 09:45 PM
Either of the two first ones should work, but DEFINITELY not the last one. Also, the 2 then 1 rule applies in America, but in England, it's ' THEN ".
Banzai
07-09-2007, 01:41 PM
Ivan is right, but just to clear up his last point:
In England ' is used for speech, and " for quotes.
mammamaia
07-09-2007, 05:33 PM
colon wouldn't be used for dialog... but if it's a quoted written piece and the original has a colon, then it would be used...
Gagoots
07-09-2007, 10:58 PM
Thanks, guys.
I guess the main question was that - if I come to a point inside dialog where the person is asking a question at a point where you would use a colon, do you use both...
so now I see.
thanks!
mammamaia
07-10-2007, 08:55 PM
I guess the main question was that - if I come to a point inside dialog where the person is asking a question at a point where you would use a colon, do you use both...
...you wouldn't properly use a colon for dialog in any case, so i don't get what you're saying there... if you mean a person asks a question and then continues the dialog, this is how it could be done [i'm guessing at what you wanted]:
"Does this ring a bell? 'Do not go gentle into that good night.' It's by Dylan Thomas, in case you forgot!" She gave him a wicked wink and went out, leaving him standing there with a blank look on his face.
Gagoots
07-11-2007, 06:29 AM
...you wouldn't properly use a colon for dialog in any case, so i don't get what you're saying there... if you mean a person asks a question and then continues the dialog, this is how it could be done [i'm guessing at what you wanted]:
You are exactly right. Thank-you!
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