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Frost
07-12-2007, 07:02 AM
For those who don't know what it is:
Wikipedia (www.wikipedia.org)
Get onto it.

Basically, I write a haiku, and the next person to reply takes a word from my haiku and writes his or hers own haiku. Then, another person comes along and does the same for the person that replied the me. And on it goes.
And so! I present to you, the beginning haiku:

As the thread begins
I craft a beautiful work
Of boredom and beer.

Cogito
07-12-2007, 07:30 AM
Dark craft threads its way
night conceals illicit work
along ink black canals

Frost
07-12-2007, 07:34 AM
Canals of venice -
Made of romantic beauty:
Fashionable? Love.

Bick
07-12-2007, 06:27 PM
The love of a Cat
Goes not by the heart, but by
His groaning stomach.

(I've never written one before =P I have no idea if I did this right.)

pyrox91992
07-12-2007, 06:36 PM
Heart-beat breaks silence,
Fluttering like butterflies,
Signs of one in love

Cogito
07-12-2007, 06:37 PM
Prowling predator
Gleaming bright all-seeing eyes
Cat runs down her prey

Frost
07-13-2007, 12:14 AM
Down 'neath the bridges
Where night hides, devious deals
Made in spite and hate.

Bick
07-13-2007, 12:17 AM
A world torn in two,
Hate and bigotry confuse.
Where has the love gone?

Edward
07-13-2007, 02:45 PM
winding round and round
a little top to confuse
playful toy to use

Bick
07-13-2007, 03:45 PM
The playful kitten.
A bundle of fur and purrs,
A glorious gift.

pyrox91992
07-13-2007, 03:49 PM
a gift given free
full of love wrapped within gold
silver ribbon too

Bick
07-13-2007, 03:53 PM
A hug wrapped with love
A kiss to take the pain from
Amidst her broke heart.

(rofl, I fail.)

pyrox91992
07-13-2007, 03:59 PM
love lost over time
long forgotten was the kiss
and the lover's touch

Cogito
07-13-2007, 07:37 PM
On the wings of Chronos
Lonely stranger sets things right
Final Lord of Time

Bick
07-13-2007, 11:11 PM
Stranger in the house.
A father she wouldn't know.
Nor would he know her.

Hrm. I need to get better at this or suffer more embarrassment.

Frost
07-13-2007, 11:11 PM
Lord of greivous thoughts:
Happiness breaks the hand that
Feeds? Rather, poisons?

Edward
07-14-2007, 08:29 PM
Poison: hidden in
a chocolate, wrapped in foil
of love it will spoil

Frost
07-15-2007, 08:14 PM
Spoil! Ha, spoiled brat,
With liqeur and cigarretes
Dancing on your breath...

Cogito
07-15-2007, 09:07 PM
Dancing tear of flame
Clinging to a fragile wick
Candle in a draft

Bick
07-16-2007, 09:48 AM
Dancing in the rain.
The insanity of it.
The pure extacy.

(hrm. I need to practice =P)

Cogito
07-16-2007, 09:56 AM
(spelling correction - ecstasy)

Salty rain of tears
Needless violence stole life
Empty stands a home

Edward
07-18-2007, 01:57 AM
upon the salty
shores it sets, little paper
a child's lost toy boat

Frost
07-18-2007, 02:24 AM
Haiku's are hard when your not experienced. Keep practiving though.

Rain might spoil the mood
Of this drunken masquerade:
"Please, may we share beds?"

^^ OUch that was a bad one.

Cogito
07-18-2007, 07:17 AM
Stabbing silver blades
Penetrating sheets of rain
Thunder crashes last

Bick
07-18-2007, 01:40 PM
A war fought bravely
One last watery drenched soul
Oh summer days!

rofl :p Yeah. Not that it makes sense to anyone but me O.o

Cogito
07-18-2007, 01:47 PM
(don't forget to select a word from the haiku above when creating yours)

Voices of the breeze
Whisper on the mountain's peak
Solace to the soul

Bick
07-20-2007, 07:45 PM
Voices in the night
Death in the thick summer air.
Grandma, I'll miss you.

Cogito
07-23-2007, 08:45 AM
Death spreads ebon wings
Weeping friends surround a bed
Moth flits past the moon

Cogito
07-26-2007, 01:22 PM
Beacon of the night
Cold light spills across the land
dripping from the moon

dushechka
07-26-2007, 01:30 PM
My hands are idle
Spilling their love's illusion
Night. Words. We are one.

Cogito
07-28-2007, 09:16 AM
Behind brittle mask
Walk the stage, recite the lines
Illusion of life

pyrox91992
08-01-2007, 01:21 PM
life is a pathway
leading unto our own ends
death's the newest road

Cogito
08-07-2007, 07:46 PM
Fogbound road of time
past recalled but lost from view
future lies in mist

Cogito
09-04-2007, 09:01 PM
Mist enshrouds the sea
Compass, undecided, twists
Where to point my prow?

ForsytheTragedy
09-04-2007, 09:37 PM
Love twists my insides
Always hopelessly needing
Confused, I hate it

The Freshmaker
09-04-2007, 10:00 PM
It is a shame how
Needing to sleep can hinder
Life experience.

Cogito
09-06-2007, 01:28 PM
Hurricane of time
Howling 'round the Universe
Life is but a sneeze

pyrox91992
09-11-2007, 09:14 AM
during hurricanes
wind whips around everyone
waves take them away

Cogito
09-14-2007, 01:52 PM
Waves swell and recede
Cold brine washes over sand
Footprints disappear

pyrox91992
09-16-2007, 08:31 PM
been buried by love
a cold heart is a dead heart
killing loneliness

Cogito
09-18-2007, 07:41 PM
(You're supposed to use a word from the previous Haiku!)

Voices of the dead
Dusty tomes of epic poems
Echo in my head

Bick
09-20-2007, 08:20 PM
Dusty Memories
Photographs of family.
Long lost, but still loved.

MarcG
09-21-2007, 12:49 PM
Lost in the shifting
Water crashing, sand sifting
World rearranging.

Nealo d
09-22-2007, 06:26 PM
The Gift of foresight
Never putting a foot wrong
Who has it? No-one!

Sorry- lot's of Haiku under the bridge since the one I thought I was following.

I haven't lost the plot
but time passed between idea
and execution

Cogito
09-23-2007, 05:08 PM
(More than 17 syllables in the previous haiku)

Moments lost in time
Silhouettes against the sky
Frost encrusts the heart

Cogito
10-22-2007, 02:35 PM
Frost upon the pane
Icy feathers hide the view
Ancient fingers creak

A wind of whimsy
11-05-2007, 11:16 PM
Fingers laying still
Ideas that have gone away
Inspiration lost