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Car'Mel
08-07-2007, 07:45 PM
o.k. i do urban books and i know that that type of writing isn't allowed on here so i was wondering what should i name a book that is dealing with a teenage girl (16) who used to go with this boy and they broke up because he kept lying to her then he moved in her neighborhood so he missed her and she as she missed him so she started going over to his house and they made up so i day one of his boys came over and he liked her so all 3 of them got it on and popping then the boy suggested that he had the teenage girl work for him and then she became something like his wh*** and he wa also a drug dealer and stuff like that i had the name's

1.Whoring for my ex
2.You can't turn a hoe into a housewife

somewhere in them areas anyone have any ideas of what to name the story. thnx

Torana
08-09-2007, 06:13 AM
This would go into creations I am pretty sure. You can pm a moderator and get them to move this thread to the appropriate area and that way you shall get the help you require with this. :)

Torana

Daniel
08-20-2007, 09:42 PM
You're looking for a title?

Personally I'd go with #2.

Banzai
08-21-2007, 07:03 PM
As would I. It has more wit about it than the first.

Daniel
08-22-2007, 10:33 PM
Plus the slight alliteration adds to the title in a positive way.

Good luck.