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boopy_cupid
10-16-2006, 10:26 PM
this game is really easy. all you do is make up a small poem and post it then the next person rates it and posts another one like this:

person 1: roses are red violets are blue i think i'm in love with you!
person 2: 6/10 lisa cherry and little merry are so nice when thier eating rice!
exc.....

i'll start:

cakes and pies
lakes and lies
you and me
can have some tea
of cakes and pies
then go swim in the lakes of lies

Felony
10-17-2006, 08:56 AM
7/10

People die
I wonder why
If peace would come
The world would be one

Laimtoe
10-17-2006, 08:09 PM
I give you a 6/10

I'm not so sure if I understand the game but I'll write a short poem I guess... even though I hate poetry and suck at it.

It's not that I'm wrong.
you just strung me along -- in territory I don't belong.

Why are you blaming me?

You knew this would happen erelong (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/erelong).
I'm leaving.
I'm gone.

Eh... I don't know about you, but I hate it.

Felony
10-24-2006, 08:46 AM
4/10

The pain inside
I cannot hide
What I feel I can't confide

Spherical Time
10-30-2006, 04:12 PM
7/10

Trapped and held,
Fixed to this serious pillow.

My limbs are not my own,
I am robbed of being me,
Lost to a doctor's sticky fingers.

I would have owned this,
I should have held on,
But it slipped silently through.

Raven
10-30-2006, 04:18 PM
6/10

The telephone begins to ring,
The toaster has another fling,
The ants are back, I'll never eat,
I might as well go back and sleep.

I'll close my eyes in sleep and sorrow,
And maybe write some verse tomorrow.