poem rater

[boopy_cupid]

this game is really easy. all you do is make up a small poem and post it then the next person rates it and posts another one like this:

person 1: roses are red violets are blue i think i'm in love with you!
person 2: 6/10 lisa cherry and little merry are so nice when thier eating rice!
exc.....

i'll start:

cakes and pies
lakes and lies
you and me
can have some tea
of cakes and pies
then go swim in the lakes of lies

[Felony]

7/10

People die
I wonder why
If peace would come
The world would be one

[Laimtoe]

I give you a 6/10

I'm not so sure if I understand the game but I'll write a short poem I guess... even though I hate poetry and suck at it.

It's not that I'm wrong.
you just strung me along -- in territory I don't belong.

Why are you blaming me?

You knew this would happen erelong (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/erelong).
I'm leaving.
I'm gone.

Eh... I don't know about you, but I hate it.

[Felony]

4/10

The pain inside
I cannot hide
What I feel I can't confide

[Spherical Time]

7/10

Trapped and held,
Fixed to this serious pillow.

My limbs are not my own,
I am robbed of being me,
Lost to a doctor's sticky fingers.

I would have owned this,
I should have held on,
But it slipped silently through.

[Raven]

6/10

The telephone begins to ring,
The toaster has another fling,
The ants are back, I'll never eat,
I might as well go back and sleep.

I'll close my eyes in sleep and sorrow,
And maybe write some verse tomorrow.

[death]

umm im not good either but ill try:



friends may abandon you
but you have best friends too
People who help you when your lonely or desperate
Sometimes we may not give each other credit
But they are there when your feeling blue

[Nonnie]

5/10 I suppose.

Wishy-washy
Squishy-squashy
Bloopidy-bloop the jelly fish goes

In and out
Up then down
Jellys highs and lows

Sting then burn
Live and learn
What jellyfish are good for nobody knows!