View Full Version : The littlest thing


Rob9660
09-08-2007, 03:49 PM
Hey guys, first thread. Now I have a complete block. A title, a couple of words that can enchance or ruin a story; I don't have one.

I am only 15 and like to write short stories for myself, I currently have over 300 in my room, all written by myself. My latest is void of a title.

Here is the jist: the main underlying theme of the story is Death has ravished the mind. The protaganist is a police officer, regular guy, but unknown to him the death of 2 close people have ruined his mind, at night he changes mind, still same person but he kills. The normal self is on the case of the murders, and one night the killer half fails a killing. He gets back home, injured and the ending paragraph is the same as the beginning.

Any ideas on a title? i know it's a bit of a stupid question

Cogito
09-08-2007, 04:39 PM
Is the story finished? If not, you don't really need to sweat the title yet. If it is done apart from the title, it still won't matter if you're submitting it for publication - there's a good chance the publisher will change it anyway.

If nothing comes to mind, I'll toss out "Jagged Blue" to you. You can use it or lose it, no problem! :)

Rob9660
09-09-2007, 07:03 AM
sweet thnx