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Thanks for reading my story buddy. If you don't write anything thats cool, reviewing is just as good if not better while the sites still low on members.

Although it would be nice if other users would read and comment, even if they just said "hey, nice work".

Hey,very nice story although i haven't heard you play anything i feel you should look harder at the pen and just forget about the keyboard. You would make a great writer.

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