This is my 2nd poem that I wrote after my first ever vampire poem. I don't think it's near as good as my first one, but I'll let you guys decide and tell me what you think. TAKEN AWAY To be away, away, oh so far away, Is like being in a prison forever in a day. For I find I have the desire to jump into the stars in the sky to take my soul away, But yet I must keep fighting, and be with her in another way. There is no price that I know I would not pay, For everything to be once more merry and gay. For I kneel down to my Lord and pray, That if he does not take me while I sleep, then guide my body and my soul so I do not go astray. I know I'm a little repetitive but with how I wanted the poem to be and sound, it was hard to think of something else to write down for ryhming words. And yes I know I used the word gay but I mean it in the old fashion of to be happy again. Not the modern day meaning of the word. At any rate, I hope you like it!
OF DARKNESS AND SIN Of blood and darkness do these creatures feed... Of strength and power do these creatures breed... Lust and beauty do these pale creatures need... To walk among the humans, among the day under the sun once more and plant their seed... The desire to be human, to age and to die, are what these poor trapped and immortal souls never will get to be... From the dark beds in which they rise, doomed to lead their eternal, cursed lives, one must look into their eyes, to see if they possess a soul indeed and in need... But yet 'tis said they possess no heart, but then one must wonder how they can also feel and to bleed... To become a vampire would likely be a great, terrifying deed... To possess the strength and the power of the supernatural, the simply unheard of, but could you cope with the price you would pay for your eventual misdeeds...? For we humans are much, much to often mislead, hardly ever to pay the price, the true price, for our greed... But yet if one were to become this blood sucking fiend, you'd likely soon regret all that you have lost and once had, knowing that you certainly should have listened, should have taken heed... For now you are stuck to be this eternal creature of darkness forever so it seems... To be the very creature that you have deemed... And there it is! I have to say I'm rather proud of it myself. Hope you guys (and gals) like my poem!