10th April 1912

By Elgaisma · Mar 10, 2012 · 825 · 1
  1. (75 word piece of flash fiction)
    You dive down into the darkest, coldest cavern following the haunting melody. With each note of the tune your flippers push the water back creating a strong current that pushes you forward. Hour, after hour you travel like this, the surreal depths giving no respite, not even a tiny pin prick of light.


    Finally, the small ray of hope keeps growing. You surface near Boleskine House and await further instructions from Master Crowley.


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    further information:
    10th April 1912 - Titanic set sail

    Boleskine House is on the banks of Loch Ness and was owned by Aleister Crowley.

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  1. jo spumoni
    Hey, very cool piece. I thought I'd check it out because of our discussion on 2nd person. You really make it work here, I think. It does remind me a bit of Choose Your Own Adventure, but this is better written than most of the stuff I remember.
    jo spumoni, Mar 12, 2012
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