3 Poems - Skull-castle, Epitaphs, Pleasure-wrong

By peachalulu · Jan 27, 2014 · 930 · 2
  1. Feeling dark. My poems are coming out weird and dark.

    Skull-Castle

    My head,
    My castle,
    My torture chamber
    cavernous,
    cobwebbed,
    carved with jaguars
    Conclusions all dark
    Watch the monsters
    sink beneath my eye moat.


    Epitaphs

    Tongue like a
    tombstone carver’s
    chisel
    gouging dreadful things:
    how are you?
    Slamming all
    advent doors.


    Pleasure-wrong

    A tongue bridging
    between mouths
    as ash from a corpse
    blows red across
    the water

    A thought-bred
    briar rose
    blooming/pricking
    rejoice
    Blood petals
    rejoice

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  1. Mans
    I apologize you if I am expressing my sense. I have enough sadness and fear so please don't increase on my sorrow. The Indian movies are enough that I seat and cry so please don't make my eyes more tearful . I ask you to write the poems with happy themes. :)
    Mans, Jan 28, 2014
  2. peachalulu
    I'll try for something more pleasant, Mans. I love to read poetry and I'm enjoying writing it but it's not
    great at best it's probably pretentious twaddle. :)
    peachalulu, Jan 28, 2014
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