A story funny story I wrote, need help

Published by Some Gal in the blog Some Gal's blog. Views: 136

Hi everyone I have a story I'd like to get oppinions on, it's already finished but still needs some work

https://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Girl-Who-did-Practically-Nothing/455363897867809

& Thank you :)
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