Can someone please critique a short paper on History? I am a terrible writer.

Can someone please critique a short paper on United States History Since 1877 History? Each paragraph must have a theme such as Rights, Art, etc. A total of 10 paragraphs, please don't laugh lol I am a terrible writer.
I will begin with my first paragraph of <6 sentences.


Students will choose one or more themes and must include one fact from each period our course has studied (listed below). In other words, you are choosing a theme(s) and explaining how that theme was present throughout our course via facts. The Final Project is due August 21st.

Time Periods

The South after Reconstruction

Big Business, Organized Labor and Urban America

Seizing an American Empire

The Progressive Era

The Great War

Roaring Twenties

Depression and the New Deal

World War II

Origins of the Cold War

1950s

Here are some ideas for themes (you can use others):

1. Identity
2. Culture
3. Art
4. Migration
5. Race
6. Labor
7. Economic Transformations
8. Film
9. Gender
10. Demographics
11. Ethnicity
12. Environment
13. Rights
14. Politics
15. Industrialization
16. Democracy
17. Reform
18. War
19. Class
20. Government

Example of project outline:

Theme

Fact from The South "Transformed" that relates to choosen theme

Fact from Big Business, Organized Labor and Urban America in the Gilded Age that relates to choosen theme

Fact from Seizing an American Empire that relates to choosen theme

Fact from The Progressive Era that relates to choosen theme

Fact from The Great War that relates to choosen theme

Fact from Roaring Twenties that relates to choosen theme

Fact from Depression and the New Deal that relates to choosen theme

Fact from World War II that relates to choosen theme

Fact from Origins of the Cold War that relates to choosen theme

Fact from 1950s that relates to choosen theme


Wiki Rubric

CATEGORY

Information

Student covers each time period with in-depth with details and examples; information was factual.

Organization

Content is well organized into themes, using headings, bullets, and a uniform look.


Text is clear, well-written and strongly supports the topic with no spelling/grammar errors.

Media

Includes 10 unique pieces of multimedia that are not copyrighted. One for each time period.