Carnival

By jacklondonsghost · Aug 14, 2010 · ·
  1. A little poem I wrote on my break at work today.

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    There's a man with a cart who is
    Rolling out pretzels.
    The long coils of dough pile around him
    Like the entrails of butchered lambs
    And carousel horses that don't go 'round so merrily anymore.

    There's a man with a booth who is
    Bagging goldfish.
    Little lives for children to play God
    He charges 25 cents a try
    And wins either way 'cause the fish are barely worth a nickel.

    And there's men and women and children
    Everywhere.
    Gnawing on fried dough and candy apples
    Like dogs with pig's ears
    Or more like hyenas crunching and devouring a lion's bones.

    And there's me and you and some other folks
    Sitting caged.
    Siamese twins and hairy beasts and psychos
    Watching the real sideshow unfold
    Looking out and seeing the world, distorted and horrifying
    Like an image in a funhouse mirror.

Comments

  1. Lavarian
    Hey, that's pretty good there!

    Some neat imagery in your metaphors especially. Very easy to visualize.

    Nicely done. :)
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