mugen shiyo Apr 19, 2012
Kinda sad. It feels like he's trapped under that grim weight. It feels like anger or hatred masked in sadness and resignation. Like a volcano that doesn't blow but implodes on itself. I once had a picture that would probably epitomize this poem perfectly BUT my computer crashed...or was crashed.

Either way, I liked the even flow of words and sentiment and the expression of thoughts and emotion. Poems like this make it easier to empathize with the author.