Fake History

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Hi guys,I've been working on my story for like 3 weeks,
trying to find everything that's wrong with it,and I was hoping you guys could find what I couldn't,here it is.

Chapter One:Catch Me If You Can Long ago Humanity lived on a planet called Avalon. The planet was peaceful,and full of light. Until a strange Force called the divine attacked. Many died ,only so many made it.To where? You may ask,the only place we could go,we fled into space searching for a planet like our own, and so we found one, it contained many resources necessary to our survival, making it our home,our new home.



And so we lived and thrived,on this new planet,recording much of our life time on stone walls. Leaving hints and clues for our descendants,that they might know why they are here, many generations trained and prepared for the possible coming of the Divine. But through all of our lifetimes we had never seen any sign of a second coming.



"Almost there,all I need now is to get past the password protection,and this software should help with that."I said to myself .



"Got it". I exclaimed.I had successfully hacked a military database,as quick as I could I grabbed my USB on the table next to me and shoved it into the computer,placing all of the information onto it,and logging off."Whoow".I hung my head back in relief.But then,it all came to me,"what if they came,what if they were already on their way"?I had to get out of there.I quickly read everything I could."Long ago Humanity lived on a planet called Avalon. The planet was peaceful,and full of light. Until a strange Force called the divine attacked. Many died ,only so many made it.To where? You may ask,the only place we could go,we fled into space searching for a planet like our own, and so we found one, it contained many resources necessary to our survival, making it our home,our new home.




And so we lived and thrived,on this new planet,recording much of our life time on stone walls. Leaving hints and clues for our descendants,that they might know why they are here, many generations trained and prepared for the possible coming of the Divine. But through all of our lifetimes we had never seen any sign of a second coming."



I didn't know what to say,it couldn't be true."Was it"?




The Next Morning:



Knock,knock,"Hello,Jim Carter?"



"Alright men go ahead."



BANGGG....



"Search the house,find him"!



"Uhh,sir,he's not here,he made a call last night".



"To"?



"The airport sir".



"Damn it,we need those files"Where was he headed?"



"Hong Kong."




Chapter Two:Running



I walked as quickly as I could, remembering to check behind me every so often,nervously I shuffled through the crowds. When I got to the desk to my luck, I was told that my flight was delayed and that I would have to wait on a Seat until they were able to get my plane into the dock.And so I sat,and sat,and sat.I kept looking around,and then I noticed man dressed in black,staring at me so I slowly got up an started walking,inconspicuously looking back I noticed he started to walk faster every minute,soon when I was out of sight I started to run, looking back I saw him starting to run also,shoving people to side I ran faster and faster,I noticed a door,quickly I made a sharp turn shoving open the door,I ran into dock full of plains,I quickly ran up the stairs into one sitting at the very back,out of breath I peered to the side looking for my pursuer,no one,so I calmly sat for the rest of the flight to New York.

Chapter Three: The Truth Is Never The Truth

The next morning,the plane landed,and I went to the store to get some breakfast,I noticed a couple of men dressed in black,the store was crowded so I bumped into a lot of people,when I got home I ate breakfast,then I went to get my hard drive out of my pocket when I noticed it was gone. I ran back to the store looking everywhere,nothing,when I got home,painted in Red,words on the wall,"The Truth Is Never The Truth",those words just erased all of the confidence I had in what I had read yesterday,how stupid I was to actually believe it.It takes time to gain a friend,and seconds to loose one,all the questions people have,"Do Aliens exist?","Is Earth flat?","Is our government hiding something?",they will never be answered,unless we do the research,we do the work.The Truth Has Been Buried,We Need To Find It.
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