Finished? YOU DECIDE!!! (In caps)

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A couple months ago I posted an original song I was working on called Troubled Child.
Overall, I got pretty positive comments on it, but one of the problems was that the song was unfinished.

Well, I think I've finished it now and would like to know what everyone thinks of it. Whether the bridge works, whether the ending fits, etc.
Or just your thoughts in general- both negative and positive. That'll work too.

Here's the video.
Unfortunately, the video file itself got corrupted and I was only able to salvage the audio, so in place my ugly face, I put in a couple of my favorite pictures of Lydia.
They seem oddly fitting...

Lyrics:

Don't run to me now
Don't run to me now
Troubled child

No need to breathe now
No need to breathe now
Troubled child

Troubled child, there's trouble in your veins
Troubled child, there's trouble in your name
Troubled child, no wandering away
Troubled child, you're trouble in my veins

Tell me what I'm supposed to do
If I'm in trouble, so are you
I am not afraid of you
I am not afraid of you

I am not afraid of you!
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