First post

I'm brand new to this whole posting on forums business but i started writing my own "book" per say and i would like to get opinions, questions, and any grammar problems anyone sees. i'm not that far in it and it's taking form as i write it so any opinions will be welcome. i think i will start posting my book on here per chapter. i want to have the chapters pretty short like a james patterson book but i want to bring in and enthrall readers and have them on the edge of their seat the whole time. i'll admit im not the best writer but by posting on here im hoping to become a better one.