Hi I am going to post a story on here I have no idea how long this story will be and am just going to 'go were the wind (in this case, inspiration) takes me' and I am fully open to comments, help or suggestions. Please tell me if the existing story makes sense, and also give suggestions on how it could be improved, and based on your comments I may edit part/parts of the story. Thx.
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