Hey!

By lolcatluvr · Jan 20, 2011 · 337 · 3
  1. Great thing you can do blogs! Does anyone know how to change profile pictures? I have been having endless problems...:p

    I have started a book called Dear Jaime, it is to be composed of letters from a Hispanic girl to her boyfriend who was killed in a gang shooting. Does this sound good to you? Or should I totally change it?:confused:

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  1. lolcatluvr
    Critics welcome!!!
    lolcatluvr, Jan 20, 2011
  2. Aquatic Writer
    I love that idea! But be careful when you write it. Make sure a reader would know that the girl really loved her boyfriend, or something of the sort. I'm not sure how you want your possible readers to see the girl, but you probably don't want them to think she's some silly, naive girl infatuated with her dead BF, complaining brattily to him about how he chose the worst time to go. So I say again, make sure it's clear that she was close to him. Hope my advice help!

    -AW
    Aquatic Writer, Jan 22, 2011
  3. Aquatic Writer
    I love that idea! But be careful when you write it. Make sure a reader would know that the girl really loved her boyfriend, or something of the sort. I'm not sure how you want your possible readers to see the girl, but you probably don't want them to think she's some silly, naive girl infatuated with her dead BF, complaining brattily to him about how he chose the worst time to go. So I say again, make sure it's clear that she was close to him. Hope my advice helps!

    -AW
    Aquatic Writer, Jan 22, 2011
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