LOL So excited changed my second story. Telling it in a different way and my character Nate doesn't get kidnapped and he gets to stay alive which is fantastic I was going to be killing off in another story.
I also don't need to be so mean to my main character. I have had to get to know Nate over the past few days and he was adamant he didn't want to die. Have learned to listen to my characters when they are determined and it has paid off I changed What About Us? my second book to Dragonfly and made it a spy based story. He is now one of the two main characters.
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