I've noticed something...
When you do not let the reader know early on why everything is happening bu just write in the moment, the rader is actually drawn so much deeper into your story. Because of the lack of information they seem disoriented and are looking hard through the words trying to find some bearing. It feels a little chaotic at first, but I think it does well because it lt's the reader feel what the character is likely feeling in that same situation.
So I guess I'll work on setting my reader in the dark with a candle and proceed from there.
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