FONT="Palatino Linotype"]Just to let you know, I'm only 14, and this is JUST FOR FUN. Anyways, can you please read this? Does it make sense, how can I improve, and is it an okay beginning???
My feet were caught underneath me. I could not run; I could not even walk. I desperately wanted to but I was stuck, more stuck than I had ever been before. I reached up and felt tiny droplets of sweat forming on my forehead. I became more and more terrified with every second ticking away. He was behind me, sharpening his silver blade. As a dark shadow of a vicious killer slowly approached, I nearly felt my heart pounding out of my chest. I had a gruesome feeling the end was near. Why me? I thought.
...And then, I woke up.
"Honey?" It was my mom. "Mmm?" I replied, slowly lifting a droopy eyelid. "Honey. Brianna? Can you sit up?" I rolled my eyes. Reluctently, I pushed myself into a sitting position. It stung. "Brianna, this is the boy who saved your life." [/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]
And....after this, I'm completely stuck. Oh, and by the way, Brianna isn't handicapped (haha, someone asked me if she was)
Any ideas on what should happen next? I'm having serious writer's block... Thanks
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