My mum's peice of Poetry

By FantasyWitch · May 29, 2008 · 523 · 1
  1. And i wanted to show off her abilities
    Don't worry she is leaning over my shoulder just now!
    How cute is this poem? It's for my little brothers thank you notes from his sixth birthday party (pirate themed)


    Just a note from me to say
    What joy we had on that faithful day
    Which held the pirate party crew at bay
    Aboard the SS Trouble

    On that day of party mirth
    Such gifts of treasure were bestowed
    Upon the hearty birthday boy
    Aboard the SS Trouble

    It just begs to say with true delight
    A joyous rant of pirate might
    A thanks for all your treasure
    From me and the SS Trouble.

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  1. Wet Weekend
    That actually almost made my cry

    The rhyme was perfect for a little kids birthday party, I was singing it lol...But i had a light hearted feeling which reminded of my childhood (Hence the tears

    Kudos to your mum (She should register on here)

    P.S whats mirth mean?...Is it a scottish word?

    John -X- (For both of you)
    Wet Weekend, May 29, 2008
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