mugen shiyo Apr 27, 2011
:) that is an interesting story indeed, and definitely more along the lines of what i imagined the future to be. i liked the political reasoning behind the threat of war and it's break out well done. I even liked the (GCS) tags of the ships. nice touch ;)

the one thing i'd point out is that if the food supplies on earth could hardly sustain the earth itself, how were they able to market these things off world without starving themselves?

i very much like the structure in this story, and hope you post a little of the actual story sometime. i think true space drama's that don't involve merely defending earth from "earth-wanting" aliens are too a rare sight these days.

good luck with this