Please help! Are there any error's in this?

By TheNightWriter · Dec 19, 2009 · 457 · 1
  1. "Of man's greatest disobedience...
    Whether, of forbidden fruit or the wanting
    of human touch, was never as great, as
    pretending to put a image on a god."

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  1. Cogito
    Yes. There should be no apostrophe in "errors."

    Other than that, can you be more specific? Poetry permits a great deal of latitude. As a sentence, however, it has commas where it should not, poor agreement between verb forms in parallel constructs, and a suprerfluous preposition ('of").
    Cogito, Dec 19, 2009
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