Points of View

By Annûniel · Oct 11, 2010 · ·
  1. Sometimes, while writing my novel, I notice that certain scenes are very difficult to write. They feel forced, like they don't really belong in the story. I didn't notice it until the other day that these scenes all have one thing in common: they are told through the point of view of certain characters.

    The story is trying to tell me that these characters shouldn't have their point of views narrated. I realized that I should probably limit it to three characters. I have half a dozen main characters and trying to give them all narrative time seems to be taking away from the story. So I suppose I have limited the number of protagonists to three. I still consider the other characters to be important enough to be called "main," however.

    In the sequel to this novel, I think the point of view will shift to three other characters. This leaves one character without ever narrating the story. I wonder if that's because he always seems to be an enigma...

    This realization really helped me become more creative. Now if only I can solve this problem with connecting the dots in the plot that cropped up recently...

Comments

  1. Melzaar the Almighty
    Now, the fun thing to do would be to change it so that one guy tells the whole thing. :p
  2. w176
    Its such a relief when you realize you need to kill some kind of darling in you stories.
  3. Cogito
    That makes me wonder if that one odd character out should be the sole POV for a story. If he or she is that different from the rest, a story from that POV could be quite powerful.
  4. Annûniel
    It would be interesting to have him as a sole POV for a story. However, I don't think it's fitting for this story. Here, he plays the role of the knowledgeable elder in a way. Though he's not particularly old or extremely exceptional, he has almost a Gandalf or Dumbledore feel about him.

    And part of this first story is the growth as a person of two particular characters and a third who acts separately from the rest and learns some terrifying things about his own family and people.

    I won't stray from these three perspectives, except maybe in a prologue or epilogue if they are included. :)
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