Remember

By Rikku Harmony · Jul 29, 2011 · ·
  1. I have him etched inside my heart, rough markings engraved in rock
    I latched it in a plastic box and wrapped it tight in iron locks
    With great passion I kissed it goodbye and proceeded to thrust it out at sea
    In hopes someday he'd come across it and maybe remember me
    His face was chiseled kindly, every crack and crevice crafted to care
    Every dimple drawn diligently, it made sure he was always there
    And I folded him up beneath my thumb, pressing down his memory
    So should he find it someday, he could stop and remember me
    I recorded every moment, trapped his honey voice inside my head
    I captured every second and caged it safely so he'd dwell in my homestead
    And I gathered it all in solid locks and chains and cast away the key
    But someday if he happens upon it, may he remember to remember me


    So when the winter has long passed by and your legacy has died
    And somebody asks me who you are
    I will look up in happiness again and answer gladly to him
    "Just someone I etched inside my heart"
    But before you leave my world behind, just hear my one last plea:
    In this new life, if you ever find time, don't forget to remember me

Comments

  1. teacherayala
    I ADORE your poem. I love the extended metaphor you've got going on here. The rhythm is also clearly thought out, and yet the words are thoughtful and not trite.

    I found it interesting that you switched to 2nd person in your poem, though.
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