The mermaid elves

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The mermaid-elves
In the future in the year 2099--Kai and Malia are 120 years old but look 18. Aquarius and Anna are 117 years old but look 16. Kai had short wavy black hair streaked with blond and blue strands. His eyes were hazel/green. He was tall like his father. Kai had dark skin. Malia had long wavy black hair down to her hips streaked with blue and blond stands. Her eyes were hazel/green. She had olive skin. She was the same height as her mother. Aquarius had short wavy black hair streaked with blond and blue strands. He had hazel/green eyes. Aquarius had dark skin. He was the same height as his father. Anna had long wavy black hair down to her hips streaked with blue and blond. Her eyes were hazel/green. She had olive skin. She was tall like her mother. Kai wanted to became a spiritual healer. His parents were in pools in the forest. Kai used his elf eyes to find his parents. The fairy queen was talking to his mom, Leilani. The maid was with her. She gave the queen her drink. Someone was invisible who was evil and put something in the queen's drink. The queen drank it. The evil person left. Zola went white and fainted. The liquid in the drink was poison. The maid helped the queen into her bed. Leilani helped the queen. Zola became white. Her maid had strawberry blond hair and brown eyes. Sienna was tall but not that tall. She fixed the queen's pollows. Sienna had Angelina summoned by Leilani, the second leader and healer of the avian clan. Leilani had thick wavy black hair down to her upper hips. She had her hair braided. Her hair had a purple ribbon at the end. Leilani had flowers in her hair. Her tail that was indigo became a little darker. Leilani looked at her husband. Her jade green eyes sparkled. She talked to her husband telepathically. Who poisoned the queen? I don't know. Merrick telepathically said. I do not like that the queen was poisoned. Leilani thought. I also agree with you.

How can I change this to make is better and to come alife?

I am going to redo the beginning and there is going to be a meeting. :)
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