Your dialogue is very, very clean. You have good technique as regards not over-manipulating the reader with it, or what I call "marionetteing", so I...
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I believe in individualism, creativity, thinking for yourself and stepping up to the plate to help others. I also like adventure and I don't want to ever "settle down" or fall into a routine. I like writing numerous different types of stories, but right now I'm on a big YA fantasy/dystopian roll. I tend to be quirky and outgoing, and for people who know the Myers-Briggs personality type indicator, I test as an ENTP. I've got an email specifically for giving writing feedback. It's mallory.feedback@gmail.com. Shoot me a line if you want any help.
Location:
Tampa Bay
Interests:
writing, art, friends, going out, good movies, improv, being wacky, having fun.
Career:
Currently sales; have also done journalism and am aspiring toward Constitutional law and someday being a college professor
Are you published?:
Yes
Favorite Quotes:
"Consider me not a child of circumstance; I make my circumstance." -Ralph Waldo Emerson
"The question is not who will let me; the question is who will stop me." - Ayn Rand
Religious Beliefs:
Agnostic
Political Views:
Libertarian
Gender:
Female
Signature
"I'd rather starve than sit inside this gridlock until it parts.
This tailor made rutiny ain't suitin' me" -Aesop Rock