He goes on a killing spree about six years later when he eventually loses his mind. =P
I should have been more specific. He needs to go to work so his boss can show him a vintage shotgun which he eventually steals and kills a bunch...
My character has just started working for the day and nothing interesting that would move the plot along in any way, shape, or form is going to...
Heh... I've had some wicked ****ty critiques. I suggest that you should add more characters. There is no dialouge... And maybe a bit less...
Pwned http://timm84.files.wordpress.com/2008/10/mushroom-cloud.jpg
Yeah. Definitely. MSWord doesn't know anything. If you try to type up poetry on on it, it freaks out because it doesn't know what's happening and...
WIN! I agree completely!
Separate names with a comma.