Thanks very much to all who commented. I particularly like the idea of parallel storylines. I think, though, with a bit more effort, I could...
I have a story, about a young man from Canada, who joins the army to fight in World War II. The problem is I find that I don't know him as well as...
Both third person and first person have their merits, especially when you want to convey information of certain types, but I agree with Romantic...
Oooh. That's a very good point! Thanks Cogito! The German soldier actually has an interesting impact on my story, and I want him to be very...
To Wreybies Thank you, I'll go have a look at that website. To Al B I'll keep that in mind, and though I don't really want to pay out money,...
I only remember being spanked once, and one time my mother gave me a good slap to the back of my head when I accidentally kicked my shoe over a...
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