Ahh I think we are talking at cross purposes. I meant that whilst he was married to her there was a stain on his character as far as he was...
Thanks MammaMaia If I know what was wrong with the original I can hopefully avoid making similar mistake in the future. The only part I'm...
Ouch Mammamaia, I didn't think I had that many errors left in the text. Would you mind explaining why your reasons for the edits you made? Also...
Firstly thanks both of you for your thoughts, I've rewritten the text with your comments in mind. I've also tried to add what I think the...
Firstly apologies if this is the wrong place to post this. If it is incorrect please delete, and I'll be on my way. I've been trying to improve...
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