My MC is living in captivity and has been doing so for most of her life, only being served really old bread most of the time. So she would...
What compells you to write? An urge to express myself. There is so much inspiration flowing through my mind; writing is the channel through which...
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I would add the two commas that I've inserted in red. The first one because "please" is an extra word, a politeness phrase - he is not asking for...
I would replace the full stop after "old" with a comma, since the word "that" in this context ties two sentences together, and can't really be the...
Norway here.. but last year I lived in England :)
I've always loved writing. Usually, if I want to get serious, I write in Norwegian, but during the last few years I have been more and more drawn...
Separate names with a comma.