haha, maybe after watching breaking bad you'd change your mind ;P
Thank you very much! I know i need to work on structure a bit, I'll try and mix up sentence structure more. Yeah i plan to make this chapter quite...
Thank you :) I'll work on it
Would anyone be interested in reading the first part of a rough first draft of the first chapter? Hehe. Any feedback would be good. There are some...
I was gonna go for some kind of propeller system. I want to keep it mechanical.
Maybe they should plan to imprison him rather than kill him so the spirit can't move on to others?
I agree Mckk, Lea's names were much better than mine :) Thanks for your suggestions, I'll put Sora into consideration i like it
Thank you Lea for all of those great city names! really grateful thank you. I have played some of bioshock infinite actually, the setting is very...
Hmmm, yeah, i really liked Aeros though. Damn the chocolate. I wanted the Aero because it sounded like aeronautics and aiross and eiross just...
Ok, thanks. When i named the city i didn't really think about it because in my head i was always pronouncing it Air-ross, not air-rows. But yes...
Yeah there is room to expand the idea. Currently my idea is that the mayor is power hungry and wants to rule, also, keeping his subjects in...
While I agree that Light Yagami is a villain he justifies it by only killing bad people or killers, or by "making the world a better place". The...
It's quite interesting. I think the initial change could be very interesting and make the story exciting. But i also feel that if it dragged on...
Cool, thank you for your feedback. I understand that how it is written is the most important thing. And yeah i much prefer stories set in...
Ok... so this idea popped into my head just a few minutes ago and it is very rough and needs some sorting out. I am posting this to see if you...
Separate names with a comma.
