In a city full of unstable magic, bad ideas can lead to great rewards, and the senior students at the Academy of Mages have the worst ideas of...
I'll just give you my two cents regarding the hidden fantasy world trope, and that's that you need to make sure that if you're going to be trying...
I've been trying for months to capture the essence of my story in a blurb and this is the best I've got so far. You raise some good points, like...
In a city full of unstable magic, bad ideas can lead to great rewards and the senior students at the Academy of Mages have the worst ideas of all....
Well, I figure I'll self-publish if I get rejected. Not even sure that I want to try for traditional publishing right now. Maybe. I don't know....
I had an artist render a cover art image for my first novel, and it came out amazing. He's asked if he can put it up in his personal gallery, and...
"Well, shit."
Andella doesn't sound right for the first human colony. I think Halo actually scored the perfect hit for this concept: Reach. That was a great...
One of the easiest ways to name a place is by its function. There's a pair of port towns in my world, for example. One is called Lordsport, the...
Synapse Soldier seems a bit wordy. Maybe shorten it a bit. In a 40k novel I read at some point, there was a similar concept called a Cept (short...
Go with the European Union concept. Australia and the Pacific islands might be banded together as Pan Oceana. The North/South Americas might...
After reading the rest of the summary I think you're going to have to work really hard to get this to not just come off as cliche. I'm not saying...
Separate names with a comma.
