Just to reiterate some points, it gets mixed opinions. I generally have no problem with it as long as it serves a purpose. You really just have to...
You can't consider them novels, but I always considered Poe's first-person short stories to be pretty scary. The Tell-Tale Heart is one of the...
But wouldn't you be able to get the same effect with multiple characters if you used the popcorn method? Maybe if you switch around between...
My apologies. Didn't know about the Train Station system.
I'm Back...Again....Again Well I'm back. I've been active and inactive on this site twice. Nothing against you guys, just been way too busy to...
I think it sounds good, but I'm not sure how a biological virus would give somebody the ability to move things without touching them. :confused:
They'll make a movie out of it?
I actually would think it's very marketable. If you feel that a 15 year old cannot fully understand abuse, I'd be interested in reading about...
Also, make sure to let your reader know that a scene is changing. There are a few ways to do it, but it really depends on what viewpoint the story...
I picture myself going into some kind of position is law enforcement. Not really a cop, more a detective or something along those lines. I just...
As far as the story goes, you seem to be writing in a fantasy-esque setting. Perhaps some spirit or an oracle of some sort - maybe even the ghost...
What's wrong with a prologue? I'll agree that not all stories are suited to have one, but they can be useful in setting the stage for the story...
Are you saying that 15 is too young to understand what abuse is? :confused:
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