From someone who's had their thread locked before for having two critiques, but not ones that were good enough, the short of it is that the ones...
That's pretty much how I experienced it. I honestly tried to read it, but I could only get to page 100. I admire him for doing something unusual,...
I agree with Ed, you could probably do a novelization of the movie and they might really appreciate you for doing it. Just if you want to get it...
Couldn't agree more - that's pretty much how I go about it, too, just put in better words than I described it xD.
Haha, I always thought I was unusual because I have more trouble writing for my own sex than the opposite sex xD. But I think it's for the same...
So I've been working on a picture book, but life stuff got in the way. Now I've come back to it, only to find that I'm not getting as excited...
Thanks for clearing that up, I was pretty worried for a moment, there xD.
Wait, it's 20 posts/2 critiques every time you want to post a new thread? I thought it was just have at least 20 posts the first time, and 2...
Get a job? That's my goal for this summer xD. At least for the first month or two, after that it's probably not enough time for it to be worth it....
I don't think we (me and whoever else said not to have empathy for the deer) mean that nothing bad should happen in the story, or at least not to...
Like Chickenfreak mentioned, I'm wondering if it's necessary for the reader to really like the deer if it's just going to die a few paragraphs...
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