An ostrich's eye is bigger than its brain.
There's a dark turn to the scene, plus the setting is at night, so I might use the first example, I like the way you've phrased it. Thanks a lot!...
Shoot, I'm sorry for all the trouble, I'll consider your advice, I'm really thankful. :)
Though I am not sure what you mean by 'monster', I suppose the position is possible, s/he is sitting with their knees half-bent, the notebook...
Thank you, but are you certain this is the correct way to form a subordinate clause? I've heard using 'with' as a conjuction isn't wholly right.
The thing is though, this is part of another sentence, this does sound more reasonable, but here's the whole sentence: "I sat with my knees to my...
No, only the notebook does, and yes, it does say 'believe' in text. It's not really intended as a metaphor though, I suppose it's part of the plot.
Hello, This is part of a sentence from the second paragraph in the story I'm writing, and I was wondering which order to use, it's quite confusing...
Somethings quite contradict others but I think it adds a beautiful vibe to the story. Thanks. :)
Interesting indeed! :-D Thank you, and for the record, I would definitely read whatever it is you're writing. Good Job.:agreed:
Although I never liked vampires, what you're writing sounds fun, and your character sounds just ideal. Good Luck!
Reading what most of you said on here, that third person prevails, I'm still developing the storyline and putting together ideas, but this is...
Hello, everyone! I would like to see the unique characters you all developed for your stories, it would help to know the way you based the...
Separate names with a comma.
