I always talk to myself as the characters, that usually helps. I think you're right, I didn't put importance in the money so I don't know what she...
I appreciate your input, I guess it's a little difficult to convey what I'm looking for (since I don't know either) but I'm already 24 chapters...
Thank you, I get your point, but the money is such a minor point, it isn't what is driving the story. Maybe that's why I am not putting that much...
My friend suggested that she may know something without knowing... like the name, or a location or something else. At this point, Mr. X just wants...
torture will be involved to get the information from her. But the problem is that she wasn't a willing participant and wasn't told anything....
I don't know. Most likely in some off-shore account under some pseudonym. Mr. Y was very elusive and paranoid.
I need help with a plot point. Here is some basic background: Mr. Y (drug lord) and Mr. X (silent partner) were in business together. Mr. Y is...
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