Thanks guys! I'm grateful for your input but I went with something completely different because of what the scene represented. I didn't need the...
I'm sorry. I'm laughing right now just thinking of the first one but only insofar as the names. A sheathed, cowl-necked, natural with a diamante...
Now this... I suck at. I've never been able to properly describe clothes before and dresses are doubly difficult. Please help me describe these...
“I looked after you. I did for you what he never did!” she started flailing her arms about. “I agree to that, for the first year after he started...
Do you have a replacement? One that conveys the same amount of frustration? I'm wracking my brain trying to think of one that suits the situation....
The argument is happening in the present, but it's about the past. Tanya is arguing that, for a time, Melanie did help her but when push came to...
Hi guys... Sorry about the weird title. I just didn't know what to write as this is such an odd question. I'm writing an argument between two...
Okay... you've chosen a really interesting date. Wipes nails on shoulder, October 15th 1988 myself so I should know she's turning 33, not 32 coz...
I, like you, have read a bazillion novels. I thought this would automatically make me a good English tutor. Apparently, I was wrong. A student of...
He brings me water from the stream. Is "me" the subject or object? If "me" is the object then what is "water from the stream"? I know some of...
I change it up every now and again. It makes for a more interesting read. I think 1, 2 and 3 are the most common uses with 1 and 2 being more...
I saved a copy of each variation and sent them to my editor. She said she liked the phonetics but preferred the one without. The reason she gave...
Separate names with a comma.
