it's funny...we tend to put stuff out there (writing-wise) as if we have somehow arrived at our final form...and then people sometimes critique as...
i tend to get annoyed when certain professions are employed and described without any accuracy...for example, when ems shows up on a scene and do...
which is interesting...i have only tightened...never enlarged...during an edit...
something with some level of intelligence and purpose, yet without human form....incidentally...the concept of undescribed monster worked really...
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i quit halfway through book three...over....written...but i will always herald the first as a good read....
or just indicate the singing without directly writing the lyrics...leave what was possibly said to the imagination of the reader...
i map out about 80%
also, a tension pneumo will often result from a perforated main-stem bronchus...you will see tracheal deviation late in the process...but will...
you don't really start coughing up blood until near the end of the process...look into hemo/pneumothroax...and tension pneumothorax...a healthy...
here's my diet: meal 1: 1.5 cups old fashioned quaker oats with .5 cup of almond milk meal 2: three eggs scrambled with 3 table spoons of...
pretty unlikely...i'll bet water is the culprit!
underworld was a labour....the first 50 pages were masterful, but the rest lost something...
hmmm.... i thought midnight's children was masterful, but i can agree with what you are saying as it applies to shalimar the clown and the satanic...
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