I think Cognito said it best. If you're writing sci-fi, check out some war styled fiction in that genre, while at the same time, don't ignore...
You can also eliminate some things by the way you describe them. An example would be to simplify the description. Instead of the above, you can...
Thanks Peach. It was a little difficult to write at first, but once I started, the words flowed like water. I think that's the trouble I had...
Its funny. Some people say to stay in one POV, others don't seem to mind. In fantasy, its common practice to shift POV by ending the section but...
This is a poem but artistic license is used heavily as it follows no rules of poetry. Understand as well that this is a piece of my reality. It...
I agree with Peach. I have four main characters, and a couple drop out and are replaced with two more mains, but in the towns they come from, its...
Its the readers who make the markets. 50 shades quenched a thirst of sheltered people who wanted to see into the alternative lifestyle world from...
Dialogue is a form of writing. When you change speakers, you need to move to a new line. If the speaker is saying a few sentences, keep it...
It truly depends on the surrounding text. If this is a stand alone sentence, then Mama's suggestion is correct. If your surrounding text is...
Separate names with a comma.