If the townspeople are actors you could have one of them forget that it is their own birthday. Lets say one of your characters wants to surprise a...
I don't think this would be an easy thing to pull off but I do think it's in the realm of possibility. Say for example the main character had a...
The more you describe them the more I like them. I definitely think every thing you've established thus far should stay but I would strongly try...
Ahh I see. I say keep it the way you want it. I prefer the idea of the of the funebrararan leaders being on the funebrararan side as opposed to...
Maybe it could be less that the T.S.C has control over the bugs and more that the higher ups of the military of the bugs have control over the...
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