Or was I dreaming of dreaming in a dream? Whatever I was doing I had to find an explanation to why I had managed to smuggle a porcupine and a...
That's what I was trying to say :p
Cool. Thanks Cogito, I'll give them a try! :p
Maybe you should treat him as a secondary character but with bigger more attractive motives. Don't be scared to give them quirky features. That's...
Glad to help! If the sentence is being used for impact like I previously said. For example: There are no trees, no life. Then I'd rather go...
If it's being used in dialogue I'd say it's perfectly Ok to be structured that way. If it's in a first person perspective it can also be used like...
Thanks guys for the help! I wasn't sure whether using the method I asked about would seem awkward or not, but clearly it works if many authors are...
I recently posted a thread about character perspectives and Cogito swiftly gave me the answers I needed. But now I have another question! :D...
"Are you OK sir?" "Err yeah I'm fine" I say while I shake my head. Why am I getting these hallucinations? It's ever since these murders have...
Slowly but surely, reality started to slide into focus. Everything I thought was real turned out to be an hallucination. I stood over her body,...
Hey Samantha! Welcome to the forum! You're the first ever person I've ever welcomed! Woop Woop! :p I'm relatively new to the forums too. Even...
As I tread with careful steps, the sound of a woman's laughter shot passed my ear and headed towards the door.
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