Some insight to the story would be useful: what's the genre? What kind of "building" is it? Who is watching them and why? Why are they there? Why...
Chickamauga by Ambrose Bierce. ("And this will all make sense in the end." - Paul Thomas Anderson)
The only title that sounds remotely interesting (to me) is "Headshot." I could definitely see this story being action/comedy. Write it. Then...
Both of them "ending up" back home seems contrived. However, if they're slated to get married, it wouldn't be unusual for her to move back home...
If you don't feel comfortable writing it, then write it. You can't have every character filter through yourself. If the character would say "gd"...
Well, there won't be a demon, because it's not fantasy, but each character will definitely have their own motivation for playing. One guy will be...
I'm working on a story that's best described as Survivor: High School. I'm going to offer as many details as possibles since there's so many...
I'd say since the MC already works at a hospital, it should involve that somehow (but definitely due add some foreshadowing from the physics...
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